The introduction is the first thing the examiner reads. A bad introduction can lower your score immediately, while a strong one sets the tone for a Band 7+ essay. Learn the simple 2-sentence formula used by high scorers.
The Purpose of an Introduction
Your introduction has only two jobs:
- Tell the reader what the topic is (Paraphrase the question)
- Tell the reader what you think or what you will do (Thesis Statement)
Keep it Short
Sentence 1: The Paraphrase
Take the question topic and rewrite it using synonyms or changing the grammar structure. Never copy the question word-for-word.
Original Question:
"Some people believe that university education should be free for everyone."
Good Paraphrase:
"It is argued by some that tertiary education ought to be provided without charge to all citizens."
Notice: Changed "university" → "tertiary", "should be free" → "ought to be provided without charge", "everyone" → "all citizens"
Paraphrasing Techniques
- Use synonyms: "important" → "significant", "people" → "individuals"
- Change word forms: "believe" → "belief", "argue" → "argument"
- Change sentence structure: "Some people think..." → "There is a view that..."
- Use passive voice: "People believe..." → "It is believed that..."
Sentence 2: The Thesis Statement
This answers the question directly. It tells the examiner exactly what your essay is about and what position you're taking.
Type: Agree/Disagree
Question: "To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
"I completely agree with this notion because [Reason 1] and [Reason 2]."
Or: "I strongly disagree, as I believe that..."
Type: Discuss Both Views
Question: "Discuss both views and give your own opinion."
"This essay will discuss both perspectives, but I personally believe that [Your View]."
Type: Problem/Solution
Question: "What are the causes and solutions?"
"This essay will identify the main causes of this issue and suggest viable solutions."
Type: Advantages/Disadvantages
Question: "Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?"
"While there are some drawbacks, I believe the advantages significantly outweigh the disadvantages."
Complete Introduction Examples
Question: "Some people think that technology makes life more complicated. Do you agree or disagree?"
"It is argued by some that technological advancement complicates daily life. I completely disagree with this view, as I believe technology simplifies tasks and enhances efficiency."
Word count: 35 words ✅
Common Mistakes to Avoid
- Copying words from the question: If you copy 3+ words in a row, they are not counted in your word total. Always paraphrase.
- Writing a general statement: "Nowadays, technology is very popular..." (Boring and overused). Start directly with the topic.
- Not giving an opinion: If the question asks for your opinion, you MUST give it in the introduction. Don't wait until the conclusion.
- Making it too long: Spending 10 minutes on the introduction means less time for body paragraphs. Keep it concise.
- Using clichés: Avoid "In this modern era", "It goes without saying", "Last but not least"
Frequently Asked Questions
Keep it between 35-50 words. Two sentences is ideal: one for paraphrasing, one for your thesis statement. Don't write a long hook or background—you'll waste time.
Practice Writing Introductions
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